书面表达
学校是我们成长的摇篮,是我们放飞梦想的地方。请根据以下提示以“My School”为题写一篇短文,介绍你的新学校。内容包括:
1. 学校建筑的位置与数量,中间是操场playground;四座楼:操场右边的图书馆,图书馆后面的有18间教室的教学楼,教学楼和餐厅中间的体育馆,餐厅。
2. 大门 (gate) 附近有花园 (garden);
3. 对学校的评价:小但漂亮……。
要求:
1. 卷面整洁,无污迹,书写工整,有美感;
2. 条理清楚,句式规范;
3. 词数:80左右;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
5. 内容尽量包括提示信息,可适当发挥;文中不得出现个人的真实信息。
范文赏析
Dear Lucy,
I'm a student of No. 4 Middle School now. Let me introduce it to you.
Our school is very big and beautiful. There is a library, two classroom buildings, a sports hall and a dining hall. I love the Chinese food there because it’s really delicious.
There is a playground in front of the classrooms. We can play basketball with our classmates there. There is a lake behind the classrooms. We can swim there. There are about 90 teachers in our school. They are all friendly to us.
We have fun at school every day. I love my school very much.
Yours,
Alice
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括表格所列提示要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第三人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山:介绍学校;
第二步,依据提示要点介绍学校,逐一陈述,适当拓展;
第三步,表达感受。