高考英语作文及范文：命题类材料作文—采访

书面表达

某英文杂志正在举办以Fancy yourself as an interviewer为主题的征文活动，请你以A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：

1. 采访的对象；

2. 采访的原因；

3. 想提的问题。

注意：

1. 词数120左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

4. 短文的标题已给出，不计入总词数。

[写作提示]

1．本文为提纲类作文，写作时主要采用第一人称，时态主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，同时还要恰当使用虚拟语气。

2．内容要点：

(1)表明采访的对象；(2)阐明采访的原因；(3)说明想提的问题。

参考范文

A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview

The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.

I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.

If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.

【解析】

试题分析：题目是一篇命题材料作文，作文的写作要点已经给出，考生需要根据提示进行写作，必须涵盖所有要点，还要注意语篇的连贯性。注意使用高级词汇和定语从句、倒装、强调等重点语法知识。词数在120左右，标题不计入总词数。注意行文的连贯性，不能出现与本人有关的信息。

【亮点说明】

范文使用了一些重点句型：定语从句：I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.；原因状语从句because he is not only the first Chinese…；宾语从句①I could learn a great deal from him about it；②what made him an astronaut and how he was trained；条件状语从句If I could interview him；非限制性定语从句which must be very interesting.等，显示了扎实的语法功底，也使作文的句式变得多样化；范文还使用了一些固定搭配和固定短语：not only…but also…；one of the…；the first to do sth；be interested in；a great deal；such…as等，使作文的内容得到了丰富；范文注意使用not only…but also…；and；also和finally等来衔接句子，使范文显得语意连贯、衔接紧凑。