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高考英语作文及范文:命题类材料作文—采访

书面表达 某英文杂志正在举办以Fancy yourself as an interviewer为主题的征文活动,请你以A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview为题,写一篇英语短...

书面表达

某英文杂志正在举办以Fancy yourself as an interviewer为主题的征文活动,请你以A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview为题,写一篇英语短文。内容包括:

1. 采访的对象;

2. 采访的原因;

3. 想提的问题。

注意:

1. 词数120左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;

4. 短文的标题已给出,不计入总词数。

[写作提示]

1.本文为提纲类作文,写作时主要采用第一人称,时态主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时,同时还要恰当使用虚拟语气。

2.内容要点:

(1)表明采访的对象;(2)阐明采访的原因;(3)说明想提的问题。

参考范文

A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview

The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.

I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.

If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.

【解析】

试题分析:题目是一篇命题材料作文,作文的写作要点已经给出,考生需要根据提示进行写作,必须涵盖所有要点,还要注意语篇的连贯性。注意使用高级词汇和定语从句、倒装、强调等重点语法知识。词数在120左右,标题不计入总词数。注意行文的连贯性,不能出现与本人有关的信息。

【亮点说明】

范文使用了一些重点句型:定语从句:I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.;原因状语从句because he is not only the first Chinese…;宾语从句①I could learn a great deal from him about it;②what made him an astronaut and how he was trained;条件状语从句If I could interview him;非限制性定语从句which must be very interesting.等,显示了扎实的语法功底,也使作文的句式变得多样化;范文还使用了一些固定搭配和固定短语:not only…but also…;one of the…;the first to do sth;be interested in;a great deal;such…as等,使作文的内容得到了丰富;范文注意使用not only…but also…;and;also和finally等来衔接句子,使范文显得语意连贯、衔接紧凑。

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