高考英语作文及范文：Being praised by my teacher

书面表达

Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.

请以老师当众表扬你为话题，用下面所给的句子开头，续写一篇英语短文。

As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.

注意：

1. 将所有句子写在答题卡上；

2. 续写词数不少于120个；

3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

[写作提示]

1．本题为开放类作文，主题为“当众受到老师的表扬”。写作时人称主要采用第一人称，时态主要为一般过去时。

2．写作步骤：

(1)续写一件当众受到老师表扬的经历；(2)总结这次经历对自己产生的影响。

参考范文

As a student，I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates．Never will I forget one experience in an English class last year．

I felt extremely nervous the instant the class began．The reason was that the new English teacher Mr.Zhang might announce the exam result and that I would probably get scolded as before．Surprisingly，when entering the classroom，he glanced at us，saying gently，“Today，I won’t talk about the exam result, but I am excited to tell you Li Jia wrote an excellent English article in the exam．I do hope he will make more progress with great efforts．”On hearing what he said，I couldn’t hold back my tears．It was for the first time that I got praised before my classmates．From then on，I fell in love with English．You can’t imagine how grateful I am to Mr.Zhang．Without his praise．I couldn’t have gone so far in my English study．